I made a few more changes after the draft you saw.
Mostly because I had made some breaks in the format and also to get rid of a repetition. (non-format based repetition that is)
Axe Trial. Beeeeeeeeeeeeeees with Earth/Water/Dark/Ice weather.
NP!
Switch mule over to level 20 job. Teleport out to Highlands. All bees con TW.. NP! Teleport over to La Thiene. -levelsync- Woo! Bees are EP. Rain starts. Proceed to kill bees. 1.. 2 ... 3 ... rain stops. wtf!?
Use trial log. Weather states to be rainy all day with a chance of sun. NP! I wait it out.. Rain starts again. Huzzah! Kill 2 bees and rain stops. . . . Check Trial log again. 'Rain with a chance of sun' Tomorrow is all sun. Day ends.
Teleport out to Yhoat. 'Wooo! Raining!" *Rush to Ifrits Cauldron* Rain stops as I approch. (damnit) . . . Waiting inside the Cauldron for rain again to finish this damned trial.
Also, it's ironic that I wrote a poem for my creative presentation.
When we studied poetry my prof had us write a poem about what we think of poetry.
I wrote a haiku about how I hated poetry...lawl
I like the first line in the first two stanzas. First it's soft, then hard; a lot of textural references in there. Reminds me of a sleep number bed. lol
I like the first line in the first two stanzas. First it's soft, then hard; a lot of textural references in there. Reminds me of a sleep number bed. lol
Took me 7 revisions to get it right. On the 6th one I was like "Holy ***, I could do this with first word repetition!". TBH I wish I had spotted that 3-4 drafts sooner xD
We were dancing akimbo
Horizontal, kind of like the wrong kind of tango
Something about this reminds me of mangos
It must be the perfume that she forgot to wear
Hidden in her down there up-do hair
I thought I'd forsaken the rhyme
Well my friend, not this time~
Hey, but the good news is if you die, your literature will sell for millions! Not that you'd benefit from it... But hey!
lol
What are they going to publish my poem, an essay about Irony, a narrative essay on the importance of being earnest and an incomplete research paper on HoD?
lol
This is a thread that I found on another website I post at. It can be really really interesting. I thought it deserved a place here.
Post your random thoughts for the day here, or anything else that intrigues you.
For starters, is it possible to give constructive critism to someone who doesn't have a neck? I totally just walked by a girl who didn't. Someone isn't getting a necklace for Valentines day!
And who decided black and white can't be colors? I want to say a racist. I really do.